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Neil Barker's avatar

I really enjoyed your writing and choices of words and phrases in this piece, Duane. This is something I have been trying to improve at the past few months. This is really key for me: "It only takes a little bit of something, to start to change everything." Truth!

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Kim Nelson's avatar

Yes! I, too, relish brevity and cherish each word. In doing so, my poems are tight-- somtimes terse. I continue to try adding detail. Sometimes it works!

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