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Jared Langford's avatar

Loved the format here. Very well structured essay

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Duane Toops's avatar

Thanks so much! I play playing with structures, with hooks, choruses, and repetition. Whether or not it actually works ia a different story lol

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Carolyn Jones's avatar

Absolutely adore this piece! The interweaving choruses seem absolutely effortless. Loved the Charlie Brown references (although I’m not quite down on named specials!)

Spectacular read!

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Duane Toops's avatar

Thank you!

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Victoria SkyDancer's avatar

I might have to respond with a California post. 😎

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Duane Toops's avatar

HA! sounds great! It'd be interesting to compare notes

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